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 The order it should go in
 

This is the suggested order for reading my fiction posts and related material. I'm going to try to take a break from posting for awhile, read other blogs, and let readers (if there are any) catch up. I may zip in to do some revisions now and then, and of course to check out comments.)

"Background on Work in Progress"

"The actual first chapter of Work in Progress"
"Next part of Chapter One WiP"
"End of Chapter One WiP"
"Beginning of Chapter 2 WiP"
"Chapter Two WiP second part"
"Chapter Two WiP next part"
"Jumping forward in WiP -- testing fonts"
"Next bit of jumping forward WiP"
"Jumping forward WiP next part"

"Characters (before WiP)"
"Notes on Work in Progress"

"About "The Seduction" part one, below"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen, part two"
"Third bit of "The Seduction of Timu Maarinen""
"Fourth section "The Seduction of Timu Maarinen""
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen -- fifth installment"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen part six"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen, part seven (rated R)"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen part 8"
"The Seduction of Timu Maarinen, part the last"

"Beginning of the story I'm working on at the moment - more to follow"
"Next part of work in progress"
"Third installment - work in progress"
"Work in progress, installment four (and the end of a chapter)"

I hope I get some feedback.

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 Bass ackwards composition
 

I just posted an addition to the beginning of Jumping Forward -- the post subtitled "testing fonts"

This is a chapter from somewhere rather near the beginning of the book -- my first posts were from somewhere near the middle.

Now I've got to try to get back to the beginning beginning.

I really know the story as a whole, this time, unlike my first attempt at a novel, and so it's coming in all kinds of order -- I can't wait to get back to the middle, but I really have to do the beginning first, I suppose.

Meanwhile the second book is simmering, and so are revisions for the first.

Maybe I'll work on revisions for awhile, and read other people's blogs and let readers catch up with me.
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 Jumping forward WiP next part
 

The afternoon that Wythe endured that day seemed longer than any she could remember. She wrote in the journal dutifully of what had passed since her meeting with Pieter Sevren that spring – only the simplest facts, and none of her reflections and emotions.  They were far too disturbing.  Still, it took several hours, and when a servant came with her dinner she was glad to put the journal aside and eat. After that there were still many hours of daylight to put behind her until she would be able to sleep, and she took up the book of verse that Rava had brought her. She only thumbed through it at first, until one of its pages caught her eye for a moment, and the verses struck her as interesting enough to take note of the name of the author, printed at the poem’s conclusion. After that she began to look for the names before looking at the poems till her eye caught Lord Maarinen – and she closed the book abruptly.

            Then she had to open it, and search again for the page.  She couldn’t find it. Maybe she had imagined it – an unconscious wish had brought Timu’s name into her mind, and she had seen it on the page.  She looked at the front of the book, but there was no table of contents.  It was really a very cheap edition. But she had to find it, somehow, or make sure she had imagined it.

            Wythe didn’t think why this search was so important, she only felt the compulsion, and she slowly and carefully turned the pages in the last red light of the sunset, with her heart beating wildly until – there – it was – Maarinen – and the verses, as she read them, seemed to sound in her mind in Timu’s voice.

            When I turn to the cries of geese in the autumn,

            Their flight bears away seasons, and hurries the years.

            Summer loses its joy and spring is forgotten,

            And the white gales of winter howl in my ears.

 

            There they stream, in their order, against the sky’s crimson,

            A moving black scar on the flesh of the clouds.

            And my soul feels the shadow and cowering, cringes:

            The beating of wings is the flutter of shrouds.

 

 

            “I am young, I am strong!” What are mere fleshly protests

            When death shares with life the rule of all men?

            Geese return in the spring, but my youth only passes,

            There is death in each pleasure I will ne’er see again.

 

            She was not surprised at its darkness.  There was no way of knowing when it was written, but Timu had always had a very somber cast to his mind, though he tried to conceal it.  Wythe suspected this work came from a time before she knew him, however, though she could not think of any specific reason for this judgment.  She read it again and again while the light faded, and it ran on in her mind when the light utterly failed, and she gave no thought to asking the guard to light her lamp. She only realized that night had completely fallen when his firm knock sounded on the door, and he announced “Maga Katya is here to see Maga Wythe.”

            Wythe knew her voice wavered as she called out that the maga could enter, but she stood and tried to compose herself before the door opened, putting the book aside but not closing it.

            “What, sitting in the dark again, Wythe?” Katya came in briskly and kissed her cheek, then stepped back and gave her a hard look.  “You seem feverish – are you unwell?  Guard – light,  please.”

            “I dozed off – it’s so stuffy in here – I’m not used to being within walls all day long,” Wythe tried to excuse herself.

            The lamp was lighted, and Katya gently moved Wythe to the sofa, and made her sit and sat beside her. “Well, you will not be pining for fresh air much longer.  I have just had word from the Spring Islands – you are to sail tomorrow to attend the tribunal.”

            Wythe sighed in relief.  The voyage would be better than sitting any longer in this little room, and when she reached the Islands she would be able to speak to Mathis and Faj, and things would begin to happen.  Of course there would be no way of knowing what things they might be, but it was better than this waiting.  And she would be too occupied to be tempted to dwell on the impossible.

            “It is good news, Maga,” she said.

            “I am glad that you think so.  Rava said Mathis was of the same opinion.  So I suppose I shall take heart too.”  Katya smoothed her skirt with a slightly agitated gesture. “And did Renhold come to see you?”

            “Yes – I am sorry to say that we didn’t improve our understanding.  I think I may have made matters worse.”

            “He is in a very difficult position.”

            “That’s another reason I’ll be glad to be in the Islands – I may be able to spur Alliance intervention, and relieve some of the pressure he’s feeling.”  Wythe felt her mind clearing, and her thoughts brightening, and she thought it might be her turn to reassure Katya. “Here in Vaaseli you forget about the true nature of the Alliance, and the way the mages who serve it think.”

            “So, even though they are charging you –”

            “I think I will find some allies.”

            Katya gave her another long look, and finally smiled.  “You do seem happier now – I believe I will trust your judgment, and put my faith in the Alliance.”

            “And – don’t forget – Mathis.”

 

            The guard woke her before dawn, so that her ship could catch the morning tide, and there was an escort of two diplomats – young men, twin brothers, who had been in service for only a year – waiting for her in the entrance hall of the service building.  Katya was there as well, and she told her as they embraced that a trunk had been packed for her, with more clothing, and already loaded aboard her vessel.  Her own things that she had brought with her from the north would not be returned to her, but she was being permitted to bring the books and clothes Rava had given her, packed in a leather satchel by the servant who had brought her breakfast.

            Their ship was The Dragon, Vaaselian, but built much to the Ravellan model, both square and lateen rigged, and of the two small, forward passenger cabins, Wythe would have one to herself, while the brothers, Rolf and Raef Harjo, would share the other.  The twins were charged primarily with maintaining the barrier around Wythe’s mind, and they seemed to have a fine facility for such work – it was still obviously impenetrable, but not so overwhelming that her own conscious thoughts were in any way suppressed or disturbed, and she began to hope that she would again have access to communication with her spirits, in dreams if not in waking.  The Harjo brothers were affable young fellows, and Wythe could tell they bore her no ill will, and she felt heartened when, as The Dragon found the gulf breezes and began her southward progress, and they all three stood at the bow rail gazing at the first rays of the sun glinting on the water, Rolf began to speak about her life with the Telmi.

            “We both did Telmi studies in our last year in school,” he told her. “Maybe you could help us with the language – of course you are fluent?”

            “The best way to learn is to use it,” Wythe replied, suiting action to intention and speaking in the tongue of her adopted people.

            Raef took her up immediately.  “When we speak to each other, we will always use it.”

            “You should also try to think it.”  Wythe saw the brothers share a glance of amusement.  “If we speak of the life of the Telmi, it will be easier.”

            “That is what we wish,” both said together.

 

            As the first day at sea passed, and the days followed one another, Wythe felt more optimistic.  Rolf and Raef were eager to learn, and she loaned them her books – they both said that study helped keep them awake on their mind-watches.  They certainly never let the thought barrier weaken or falter.  But their companionship was helpful, Wythe felt, in preparing her for the tribunal: it cheered her and gave her new confidence, and as she discussed Telmi life with the two young men she found opportunity both to give thought to her defense and to influence at least their opinions, if only a little. 

            “Telmi life seems simple, but hard,” Raef told her over breakfast the third morning out.  Rolf was sleeping after maintaining the barrier through the night.  “You must move so much in the summer, to find good pasture, and even in the winter, when you are in your settlements, you must move your animals to different places in the marsh and the forest, and keep a watch out for wolves.”

            “And there is always hunting and fishing, and in the spring and summer gathering greens and berries – and nuts and rice in the fall – and harness and tools to be made and repaired, especially in winter – and of course always children to care for, and cooking and sewing –” Wythe added to the list of incessant tasks. “Each family works for itself, and all help each other.”

            “And the shamans gather herbs and keep the calendar for the rituals –”

            “And teach their apprentices –” Wythe fell silent and looked down at the table where the remains of their breakfast still lay, and wondered how Tuomo was managing.  She could feel the place in her mind where she was still linked with him, but it was filled with a fog – he really had no way of knowing why she had ceased to communicate with him, unless Farin had found a way to get word to him – if he had thought of it. Tuomo must think she had abandoned him.

            “I am sorry, Maga,” Raef said in Vaaselian, perceiving at least the general trend of her thought. “When we are in the Islands your counsel can communicate with your friends with all of your concerns.”

            “It would be helpful if I could communicate now with Master Skipman, at least,” Wythe said, though it was a boon she didn’t even hope for, and Raef shook his head, just as she had expected.

            “I have heard that Master Skipman is very clever, and very thorough,” he said reassuringly. “I am sure he has already anticipated much of what you would like to tell him, and is acting on it.”  Raef’s own smile was hopeful, and Wythe returned it, for his sake, and because she knew it was true – Mathis was certainly quite capable, and knew her well enough to do better than guess what her needs would be, especially with Faj to coach him.  She would just have to curb her impatience – it would be satisfied in three or four days when they arrived in the Spring Islands.

 

 

            The Albraharan coast was dotted with fishing villages wherever there was an appropriate beach for the boats to be drawn up, but deep harbor ports were far less common.  Captain Maarinen had found one in the early days of his merchant career, a former haunt of corsairs, and its obscurity was well suited to his purposes. The Marten had taken a great deal of damage in its last crossing from Xanthia, in an encounter with a hurricane, barely making shelter here, but at least now repairs could be conducted and the captain could enjoy some peace at the same time.  Fareesh respected his partner’s privacy and independence in theory, but he could still be demanding, if permitted.  A communication to the clerks of their enterprise back in Marda that repairs were required would be sufficient, with the extra insurance of the secrecy of Timu’s port and private shipyard, to be reasonably certain that Fareesh would leave him alone for a few weeks at least.

            Construction of the new ship was coming along well – in fact, it was nearly completed, and Timu felt he had every right to see the fruition of his innovations before returning to his responsibilities in the firm of Fareesh and Maarinen.  It was not that he had ceased to enjoy the life of a mariner, but it seemed that he would also never cease developing new interests.  Long ago his great passion had been following birds and beasts, observing their habits and making drawings of them and their surroundings – and now that urge to set pencil to paper had wed itself to his life-long love of sailing and his professional interest in improving sea-going transportation. For weeks he had drawn plans, and then, whenever he could make port, taught Albraharan craftsmen to follow them, and the work brought him unusual satisfaction.  After his months ashore in Xanthia, five years ago, on that strange errand for the priests of the mountains, he had wanted nothing but the sea – or almost nothing – now, observing his workmen employed with the finishing touches of his new design, he was beginning to wonder if it were not time for a new phase – he had enough wealth already to last the rest of his life – maybe he should give up the business of trade, and turn to ship-building as his new vocation.

            Timu knew in his heart that what he needed was something fresh, to keep old memories from haunting him.  His work for Fareesh had been enough, at first, to quell the disturbance caused by Willem of the Spring Islands. But the night of the storm, when he had seriously doubted his own chances of survival, the old cliché had come true, and his whole life had seemed to pass before him, and for the first time in nearly ten years he felt more regret than joy in his memories.

            While he was thus musing, and felt the first faint perception of someone attempting to communicate with his mind, he made the natural assumption that Fareesh had insisted the clerks try to reach him – he had sensed attempts before this – and he turned his thoughts away deliberately.  But the intrusion continued, with the persistence of a pre-dawn mosquito, and finally Timu felt he had no choice but to heed it – though he need not respond, unless it were truly urgent.  Yet though he directed his attention purposively to the communication, it remained faint and indistinct, like a voice heard through a wall – it would be an incompetent clerk, then – or could it be someone who barely knew him? – or someone – who had known him – long ago – ten years ago – “Mathis?”

            “Timu Maarinen – you are the very devil to find, did you know that?” At last the once familiar mind of Mathis Skipman made full contact with Timu’s perceptions. He was the same Mathis, that was certain.

            “Quite purposely, I assure you.”

            “Well, you’ve given us nothing but headaches – we’ve sent messages on every ship that put in at Barran or the Islands, in case they might cross paths with you, and I’ve been trying to communicate with you for – oh, more than a week now – where the devil are you?”

            “I cannot tell you – it is the only way I can have some peace – though if it were really that urgent, you could have reached me through Elian.”

            “It isn’t something we want to let Elian in on at the moment.” There was an instant of hesitation in Mathis’ thoughts, and then, with almost violent clarity: “ Timu, it’s Wythe.”

            Timu’s mind screamed to him yes and no simultaneously, and the sparkling sunlight on the waters of the harbor became blackness, the sound of the workmen’s tools disappeared in the howling of a gale – but the storm and the night were only his own thoughts, long submerged, but always attempting to breach his will’s surface, and now thrusting up into his still-resisting consciousness.

            “Timu? – I’m sorry – are you all right?”

            The sun came back, the gale wound down to the gentle sea breezes, bearing the rapping of the workmen’s hammers and the scraping of their planes.

            “Timu?”

            “Yes.  Yes.  I am here.”

            “Well, I knew that – are you paying attention?”

            “What is the matter with Wythe?  Is she all right?” It was the first time in five years he had consciously used her name, even to himself. After leaving Willem with the priests in Xanthia he hadn’t been back to Vaaseli, for the very reason that he knew Elian would speak of her, and his sister would both discover his secrets and trouble his hard-won resolve. Now that he had done it, had formed Wythe's name in his thoughts, and re-formed everything he knew of her, there was suddenly no more suffering, and his mind turned at once from his own pain to whatever trouble had caused Mathis to contact him.  “Is she ill? – Is she in trouble? – is she –”  No – he would know if it were that – he would feel her absence from the world immediately, if it were that – it was some kind of trouble –

            “Timu – pay attention, will you?  She’s healthy enough, according to Rava.  It’s trouble with Renhold, and our old friends in the Council of Lords, and a few other Essinian hotheads.  And with the Alliance. You must give me your full attention, and plenty of time to explain – can you do that?”

            “Yes, of course.” Timu cast his eyes over the worksite, and picked out his foreman on the deck of the new ship, and, making eye-contact, signaled him with a raised hand, and left the spot where he had been sitting on a pile of lumber and picked his way along the rocks of the shoreline till the sounds of the laborers were muffled by the splash of the waves and the cries of the gulls riding the brisker breezes high above the harbor. “What do they say she has done?”

            “Bless you for putting it that way – it’s misuse of telekinesis, if you’ll believe it – defying the articles of the Peace that we defended ten years ago.  That’s the worst of the Alliance charges – and your countrymen are calling it sedition and rebellion – a declaration of war on the crown of Vaaseli.”

            “Absurd!”

            “You would think so. But I’m afraid she’s let herself in for it.”

            “But Wythe is allowed her use of telekinesis as a shaman of the Telmi, and the Alliance never forbade her to experiment with other peaceful uses – she would never go beyond what is permitted –”

            “It comes down to a question of what is permitted then – but let me start at the beginning, would you?”

            “Begin, then –” Timu settled himself as comfortably as he could on a rock to hear his old friend’s story – his thoughts remained a little turbulent, but the shape of Mathis’ mind was comforting; the Ravellan’s reasonableness and skepticism had sustained them all in their previous trials together, and Timu could easily sense Mathis’ real love for both him and Wythe beneath his sometimes brusque manner.

            “Well, you know that Wythe has been living among the Telmi for the last five years – summers only at first, but also the last two winters –”

            “I did not know about the winters – I have not been back to Vaaseli for five years myself, because I knew that she was there, and I suspected Elian would try to arrange a reunion.” Even while Wythe was in Barran and Marda, visits home had been difficult – Elian never could get over her conviction that Wythe and Timu would be better off living together, and never tired of trying to convince them, whenever she had the opportunity. Mathis seemed to find the mention of Elian awkward, and held his thoughts silent for a minute, so that Timu finally urged him, “Go on” and Mathis went back to his narrative.

            “After training with the Owl shaman – you remember Oumua? – for three summers, and serving the Raven while she was with them, she took up permanent residence – she’s become the Raven shaman – become Telmi in all things, in fact –”

“Yes, I know all this from Elian –” 

“I have not communicated with Wythe myself, you understand – I know this from Farin and Rava. Anyway, this spring it was the turn of the Raven clan to go on an errand for the people to prepare for their great Midsummer ritual, when they light their sacred fire – you probably know more about its meaning than I do – it involves a journey by the shaman to the lands farthest north, near the Uttermost Sea, where some sort of fire – not marsh gas, but a strong, hot flame – burns in the ground – the shaman starts a fire from this flame, and brings coals from it to all the clans before Midsummer, when each shaman will begin a new fire-cycle for his or her clan – the fires of life for the new year.”

            “Yes, I know of that ritual – it is the single most important public aspect of their religion –”

            “Even the land where the fire burns is sacred, and forbidden to any but a shaman or apprentice.  Well, this year, as Wythe and her Raven escort approached the sacred lands, they ran into a man from the south, a Pieter Sevren, vassal of the Paarin –”

            “I know the family –”

            “They found his camp first, and discovered that he had trapped and killed many animals, for their skins only, wasting much meat – very sinful, according to Telmi traditions – but the man and his companions were gone south already, so they tracked them, and overtook them.  Apparently this Sevren considers himself a naturalist, and is planning to mount an exhibit of the stuffed bodies of creatures from the far north in Essin – for the education of the southern population.  Wythe didn’t like it, and told him so, and insisted on a ritual of atonement for the lives he’d taken – you know what the Telmi believe about hunting and so on – but she consulted her spirit guide, and apparently got permission for Sevren to carry through with his plan – though her spirit gave her a vague warning about the fellow as well. She spent a night encamped in the same place with Sevren, and it wasn’t till the next morning that she got the rest of the story that he’d tried to conceal from her –”

            “He had been in the sacred lands himself –”

            “You guessed it – if Wythe’s companions – some of Irjo’s sons, you know – had known, they would have slain Sevren and his two Toler guides – but Wythe kept the information to herself, and did her best to block Sevren’s memory of what he had seen, and the other fellows’ memories too – and communicated a warning to Farin – until she had an opportunity to speak to the elders and the other shamans. Apparently the memory block lasted until after Sevren had been back in Essin for a week or two, but eventually it all came back to him, and he’s not the sort of fellow to keep such a thing to himself – of course he’d think of all kinds of practical uses for the fire and the oil that pools up in its vicinity, and you can imagine the interest this kind of thing excites among the craftsmen of Essin – and Renhold’s scientific friends.”

            “But Wythe must have communicated with Renhold.”

            “Of course – and she believed he saw his duty to the crown’s agreements with the Telmi – but there’s a lot of pressure coming from the guilds, and Valmur’s old supporters saw their opportunity to drive a wedge between Renhold and Wythe – they have revenge on their minds of course, but also hopes for a chance at a power grab – they’re courting the guilds now, and pressing Renhold to send ‘scientific expeditions’ north – in fact they sent one, in defiance of the crown’s authority – and that’s when Wythe’s real trouble started.”

            “What did she do?”

            “She put up a physical barrier around the sacred lands, using telekinesis – don’t ask me how she did it – I have all her old papers here, and I’ve been going through them, but there’s no mention of such a thing – it’s something new she’s discovered or developed.”

            “And that is the misuse of telekinesis she is being charged with? But it is not destructive, is it?”

            “If you rode a horse full tilt at it, you might be thrown – but that’s about the only way it could injure anyone. I think we can beat the charges – I’m her counsel, by the way – there’s going to be a tribunal here in the Islands – Faj is going to testify about how Wythe’s power developed and how she uses it – and we need your help.”

            “What do you wish me to do?  Shall I send written testimony?”

            Now Mathis not only hesitated, but cloaked his thoughts for a little. “Let me explain something, Timu.  Even if we get Wythe off as far as the telekinesis business is concerned, there is still the issue of her ‘interference’ in Vaaselian affairs.  She is still a maga of the Alliance, and a diplomat of the Ravellan League, you know.  They’ve been ignoring her, because they don’t like the things she’s learned among the Telmi – they’re not consistent with the teachings of Alidor – but they can’t ignore the fact that they seem to work, somehow.  They pretty much cut her loose, and hoped that they wouldn’t have to deal with her. But now they have no choice.  The traditionalists in Vaaseli are definitely out to get her, and the Alliance doesn’t want to get caught up in that sort of thing.  They have to do something to show that they don’t approve and we’re pretty sure they want to just plain take her out of the Vaaselian picture.”

            “What are they planning, then?”

            “They’ll make the charges of actions inappropriate to a representative of the Alliance stick, and they’ll sentence her to some kind of imprisonment, and permanent mind-control, to prevent any future ‘interference.’  You can imagine what that would do to her –”

            Timu could imagine.  It would break her heart, maybe break her spirit or even break her mind. Mind-work was her life to her, and always had been.  If her every thought and use of her thoughts were restricted, and her body imprisoned as well, she might eventually lose her reason. She would certainly lose all pleasure in life. It was cruel out of all proportion.

            “Wythe is not going to want to abandon her people, that much is certain,” Mathis was continuing. “The Alliance is going to try to protect her by asserting its authority over her, and protect itself at the same time – in its finest tradition of ill-advised caution – and leave Renhold to sort out his own problems.  The fact is, the Alliance mages are going to have to face up to their responsibility if we are to avoid a crisis in Vaaseli like the last one – this isn’t an entirely internal Vaaselian affair, by any means – the rights of the Telmi themselves should come under Alliance jurisdiction, for one thing –”

            “But what about Wythe?”  Timu felt Mathis was going off on a tangent.  Of course the Telmi were important and so was Vaaselian stability, but all he could think of was Wythe’s own immediate fate, and he assumed that was what Mathis wanted his help with.  If Mathis had a fault it was his urge to scatter his forces and attend to every possible problem simultaneously.

            But again Mathis hesitated. “Timu, I want you to think about what I’m about to say very carefully.  It’s mostly for Wythe’s sake, but it’s for yours too, and for the good of Vaaseli – I know you’re an exile of a kind by your own choosing, but I know you love your country, and of course you must be concerned about what becomes of Renhold and Elian and the rest of your family –”

            “Mathis, get on with it –” A sense of apprehension was rapidly growing in Timu’s mind, and a strange excitement, almost an eagerness.  He tried to suppress the suspicions that he was forming about what Mathis was going to ask of him, and partly succeeded.

            “I know the only reason you two separated was the power – there was the business about it being dangerous for you to go on sharing in it, and the alternative of Wythe giving it up seemed impossible to her – but the Alliance is going to forbid her to ever again make use of it anyway – if what Faj tells me is true, and your reunion will cause the power to diminish until it fades entirely, then the Alliance’s problem is solved, without the need to imprison Wythe or impose mind control on her –” Timu could sense Mathis’ growing excitement, but his own outstripped it – yet the apprehension grew along with it. “If you two were to publicly marry, and return to Vaaseli to live as Lord and Lady Maarinen you could both even continue working for the Telmi – you’ll have your seat on the Council of Lords, and you can keep on working on Renhold to make sure he does the right thing – and your parents would be glad to know that the estate would have a good manager – they’re not getting any younger, you know, and Arn doesn’t want to deal with it, even though he’d do it if he had to:  all your people would do much better under your care, you know that – and as your wife, Wythe would be a Vaaselian subject, and have as much right as any other to her opinions on Vaaselian governance and relations with the Telmi.” Mathis paused, apparently satisfied that he had covered all his most important points, and waited for a response from Timu. It was a long time coming, and Mathis at last succumbed to his impatience. “I want you to come to the Islands and tell the tribunal mages that you will take responsibility for Wythe – take her as your wife, so that the power will no longer be an issue, and spare them the headache of having to control her.”

            “I cannot claim to be able to control her –”

            “Of course not, but it’s only the appearance here that matters, to the Alliance, at least.”

            “And will Wythe agree?”

            “Surely that’s up to you.” Timu could sense Mathis’ amusement, and he resented it a little.  When they had been rivals for Wythe’s affections Mathis had been tenacious, even when Timu himself was entirely certain that Wythe loved him in a way that inevitably excluded all others – but Wythe herself had been hard to convince – her loyalty to Mathis and her resolve to avoid all unkindness had only been surmounted by the potency of the power that their love had engendered.  Their love for each other was so much larger than just themselves, and it had affected the fate of Vaaseli and the entire Alliance – their reunion would be an equally serious matter – not just a question of Timu wooing Wythe all over again and winning her hand formally. And already Timu could imagine her objections.  The Alliance would be handing her over to his custody, in effect. He would become her jailer.

            But that would never be the way he saw it. And he would not try to control her. He would be her partner, and her advisor, and her helper – and her lover and her husband – all the things he had wanted to be since he had met her.  Already he could imagine the arguments he would use to convince her – and not just the ones he could put into words.

            “She doesn’t know anything about this, by the way,” Mathis was saying. “She isn’t allowed any communication, and I have no intention of telling her when she gets here.”

            “When is she arriving in the Islands?  When is the tribunal?”

            “Rava tells me her ship set sail two days ago – when she arrives, in three or four days, the tribunal will begin.  Can you be here that quickly? I think you should see Wythe after the initial hearing, so she’ll have an idea of the grimness of the alternatives to being your wife – but not too long after, so that we can work quickly on the mages before they get any ideas about altering their charges or their plans.  The way they’ve got it figured now I know I can beat them, and get them to agree to my proposals. And of course the sooner we get Wythe squared away the better, so that we can get started on Alliance action in the Telmi matter, and you two can get down to politics in Vaaseli. If this business isn’t resolved soon there might very well be another civil war, and this time it’ll be worse – the old guard just might seduce the guilds to their purposes – and depending on who prevails in the south, there might very well be war with the Telmi – it would mean a bloodbath, and the massacre of innocent tribespeople.” Mathis paused again, but not for long.  He could tell that Timu was on the point of agreeing, and didn’t want to leave room for any further objections. “Can you do it?”

            “Three days?” Sailing The Marten was out of the question, but the new ship was nearly ready.  One more day for a little painting and getting the rigging set, and three days sailing – she would be much faster than any ship in Fareesh’s fleet – he could do it.  “Four days.  That I can manage.”

            “That’ll do – and you had better take the time to find some wedding clothes and a couple of rings – I know you two won’t want to wait, once you’re back together.” There was the amusement again, but this time Timu smiled.

            “I will see you in four days’ time.  And Mathis –”

            “Yes?”

            “Thank you.”

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 Chapter Two WiP second part
 

            Riding north and west once again, Wythe was willing to indulge Tuomo’s desire to make haste, and complete their return to the sacred lands in one day.  They had made only the roughest of camps while they pursued Pieter Sevren, without fuel for a fire or fresh water, and the forest would provide more comfortable shelter than the empty hills.  She knew he also wanted to know what she was thinking of the man of the south, but that was a desire she was not yet prepared to acknowledge, let alone satisfy.  Now that she had contacted Farin, and was assured of his assistance, she wanted only to put the matter out of her mind, until their errand was completed, and they were on their way home to the summer pastures.

            Tuomo, for his part, felt his loyalties and opinions divided.  As they rode his brothers were communicating their own thoughts freely among themselves, and were growing in their conviction that they ought to have stopped Pieter Sevren and his guides – permanently. They knew quite well that this man meant trouble, though they knew nothing beyond his deplorable hunting habits, and his timid lechery. And Tuomo could see their point, but was drawn to sister Wythe’s attitude of mercy and compromise. He was more sensible than his brothers of their relation to the crown of Vaaseli, and realized that killing the southerner and the two men of the Toler would be considered a crime by Prince Renhold, which would not go unpunished.  The last time the Raven had slain a southerner it was time of war, and the men were soldiers, and therefore it had been excusable. But for ten years the Telmi and the throne had lived under a quite friendly agreement, and the kingdom itself had been at peace in all respects.

            But Tuomo was also sensible of a vague premonition that time of war was coming again, and somehow it was connected with Pieter Sevren.  When would sister Wythe speak of what she had perceived in the man’s mind?  He knew she had learned something disturbing. Twice he had seen her make a sign of protection, and he knew she did not do that lightly. But he would not pester her as a child would do.  He was nearly fifteen now, and knew that one of the most important disciplines of a shaman was patience.

            So they rode through the afternoon keeping silence, to reach the forest before darkness.

 

            “So, Shel – do you remember that fellow Sevren who came through here last winter?”  Lord Farin was in his bath in his chamber when Shel answered his summons, with a tankard of ale on the floor beside him.  His back must be bothering him again, the secretary considered – that was the usual reason for a soak in the tub, in the absence of a lady whom Farin considered worthy of his attentions and worth the trouble of good grooming.

            “Of course, my lord. We almost never have visitors at that time of year, and certainly not any traveling further north.”

            “Well, he is on his way back here.  Maga Wythe has encountered him, and he’s given her some sort of trouble.  Or she thinks he might in future.  She would not speak freely.”

            “The maga communicated with you?”  Shel was truly surprised.  Farin detested formal mind-work, though his natural abilities were tremendous, and the maga was known to be most reserved, content to live in isolation with the clans of the north.

            “You see what I mean?  The man needs watching, or she would not have bothered.  And that is what she has asked me to do – observe him closely when he should arrive.  What I wish to know is if you know anything much about him – or if you can find out.”

            “I know he comes from an ancient but minor family of the coast, vassals of the Paarin, noted for whale-fishing.  Lord Arno himself took an interest in Pieter some years past, and found him a tutor in the sciences – he has no telepathic ability, so the service school was out of the question.  He has been living as a scholar in Essin on a stipend from Lord Arno for the last two years.”

            “Natural history is his field, I take it.”

            Shel nodded.  “A development of his skill as a hunter.  Huntsman to the Paarin was not a sufficiently honorable occupation, apparently – and Lord Arno seemed to agree with him.”

            “Or maybe he just did not care to have the fellow hanging about any longer, eh?”

            Shel allowed himself a smile. “Yes, my lord, I found him to be quite a – difficult – person while he was here – and I suppose you had the same reaction.”

            “Just conceited, I thought – with almost no reason.  Ah well.  If there is anything more to be known about him, we will know it when he returns.  See what you can discern of his mind when the time comes, and we will put our heads together for a report to the maga.”

            “And I will make a few inquiries, with your permission.”

            “Inquire away.  Whatever may help my little marten.”

            Shel repressed his next smile until he had retired from his master’s chamber.  His lordship still called her his marten, though she was a maga of the Alliance and a shaman of the Telmi – he cared for her more than any of his own sons or daughters, and had from the moment he met her. Whatever Maga Wythe needed, Lord Farin would provide, if it were within his doing – and he would need Shel to help him, partly, no doubt, to keep him from doing more than he should.

           

            The little party headed for the sacred lands reached the forest before dusk, and found a pleasant glade to camp in.  It was without fresh water, but their flasks were still nearly full from the morning, and the shelter of the trees provided more pleasant surroundings than the bare hills. Tuomo made up their fire and brewed tea and in the last light his brothers set some snares so that the next day they might have some fresh meat, and for their evening meal they contented themselves with a porridge of rice.  Wythe and Tuomo would begin a fast after this meal, until the new fire was gathered, and the next hearth he laid would be one of ritual rather than cooking and conviviality.

            When his older brothers had rolled themselves up in their blankets and begun snoring, Tuomo took out his bundles of leaves and roots and sat in the firelight sorting through them.  By next midday they would be in the fields of the fire, according to Wythe, and it would be time to prepare the infusion that would open their visions.  He wanted to have everything ready ahead of time, for a feeling of urgency had been growing in his mind since parting with Pieter Sevren – it was not only that they had lost more than two days because of the southerner – Tuomo had the same sort of feeling now that he knew from approaching storms – the need to prepare, to make things secure, to be ready to endure a trial of some kind.

            And he knew that sister Wythe felt it too.  The link between their minds was always open, even when she cloaked her specific thoughts from him – it had been that way from the first, when he was a little child, and she first came to dwell with the Telmi.  Those first years she had only spent summers among them, but not as the former southern scholars, according to his father, but even then living as one of them, doing the same work as any woman, as well as studying the ways of the shamans. Tuomo had felt drawn to her instantly, and shadowed her constantly, though his many brothers made fun of him.  They all shared their father’s warrior nature, but Tuomo was different, and had always known it.  But until sister Wythe came, he had never known the reason.

            Of course all the people respected sister Wythe. Without her help, Saaro might have died – Tuomo had heard the story many times, though he had only a vague memory of Saaro, and Maaki Elu and the lady Aulia from the south.  The Raven had always been known for the great powers of their shamans, but Saaro had been the most powerful in many generations – and though he had lived, still they had lost him, when he went to the city with the southerners, never to return – and so the respect for Wythe was tinged with resentment, until she came back, and gave herself as their shaman.  Even then, without the insistence of Irjo, Tuomo doubted she would have been accepted – except by him.  He loved her from the first.

            Juhto and Mika said Tuomo just missed his mother – but that wasn’t true, or not the whole truth. He had mourned his mother horribly in the first month after she drowned in the snow-swollen river, until the dreams began – she came almost nightly for many weeks, and comforted and taught him while he slept, so that there was no real reason to miss her. But it was true that sister Wythe was like a second mother to him. She understood him, and his dreams, from the first time she spoke to him – their minds had connected instantly, like two rivulets of water joining. And he had become her apprentice.

            And now he knew her mind was watching and listening to his, and he looked up from his herbs and she smiled at him from where she sat on her blankets on the opposite side of the fire, and her thoughts beckoned him.

            “Come sit beside me, Tuomo.” He gathered his packets and placed them carefully in their satchel, and when he was settled at Wythe’s side, she took his hand. “I am glad to have you near me – you will be near me always.  Even if we are parted.”

            “Why should we part, sister?”

            “There might be many reasons. But you are like a son to me – and that is a comfort, because I will never have my own children.”

            Tuomo knew that it was true, that a shaman never married or had a family – but he also knew of Lord Maarinen, and the marriage of his mind and Wythe’s.

            “Are you sorry you cannot live with your husband?” Even he would have hesitated to ask such a thing, if he had had to voice it, but in their thoughts it was not so difficult – he felt he suspected the answer already.

            “Sometimes I am, a little. When I am reminded of him too directly.”

            “Is that what Pieter Sevren did to disturb you?”

            “That is part of it. But Timu and I are never really parted – just as you and I can never truly be separated.” Wythe gave Tuomo’s hand a squeeze, and continued to hold it tightly. “I am disturbed, you are right – but it is something that Pieter Sevren did before we encountered him.”

            “The animals?  We made atonement –”

            “No, it is worse than that, and it is not over.” Now Wythe held both Tuomo’s hands, and held his eyes with hers. “There can be no atonement for what I fear is about to happen.  Pieter Sevren was in the fields of the fire themselves, and saw the fires and the pools of oil, and thought of them as a man of the south is bound to think – of ways he could use them, and help others like him use them.”

            It took Tuomo a few moments to realize what Wythe was telling him, and then his thoughts swirled into chaotic motion. It was far worse, and there was no atonement – it was a complete sacrilege – even his brothers would not be permitted to go with them next day, but would stay on the edge of the forest, above the rocks and the marshes – “But you let him go –”

            “My spirit advised me – though she also warned me.  I do not understand it either – except that – what else could we do?  I know that Juhto and Mika and Turpu would have killed them – but it would mean their own deaths, or worse – maybe soldiers here, and retribution for the whole people. And it still might mean that, when Pieter Sevren returns to Essin.  He will not keep silent forever, though I clouded his memory, and the memories of his guides.”  Now Wythe released Tuomo’s hands, and dropped her own in her lap weakly, and hung her head. “I can only trust in Prince Renhold, and his wisdom and justice.”

            “Sister,” said Tuomo out loud, though in a whisper, “do you trust him?”

            But Wythe did not answer.

 

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In the morning a servant brought Wythe a breakfast of toasted bread, porridge, and tea, and she dressed and made her own bed after eating. Then she sat at the table, looking out of the window, waiting.
As she now understood it, she had been taken into custody by order of the Alliance, on charges of the misuse of telekinesis, among others, and Renhold had done nothing to resist that order, though he had at least resisted the pressure to bring Vaaselian charges against her and have her imprisoned in the castle dungeon. The only thing he had said to Maga Katya in reference to her was to request the assignment of several clerks to prevent her communicating with anyone. The reinforced mind-barrier was more than adequate, and Wythe felt it interfering even with the entirely internal operations of her mind. Her dreams were hazy in her memory, and nearly inaccessible, and she knew it was because of the barrier.
Though she had access only to her own conscious thoughts, which, no matter how she examined them, came out to the same miserable conclusion, the view from the window at least was not without interest. She could see bits of the service school courtyards from her vantage point, and they were quite busy, at intervals, with the movements of students enrolled in the summer term. She could even see as far as the stables, and after a while she became aware of a party in their court preparing for a journey. They were three boys and a girl, and even at this distance Wythe could tell, by the breed of their horses, that they were Telmi – the telepaths most recently accepted for service training. They had a baggage pony in addition to their mounts – they were going home, not for the already-past Midsummer rituals, but in the midst of term. From their deportment Wythe knew they were not happy. She stood and leaned over the table, trying to see them more clearly and remember what clans they came from. She wondered if they could see her at all through the glass of the window, and when one of them looked up in her direction, then paused and nudged one of his companions, and pointed, she knew that they could. She lifted her hand in salute, and after a time all four returned the gesture, and bowed. She wished she could communicate with them. Before they could mount, a group of Vaaselian students ran into the courtyard, and there were embraces and handshakes. They had some friends at least, who regretted their leaving, and probably regretted the reason. Wythe backed away from the window.
When the guard knocked on the door to announce a visitor Wythe had a momentary hope that it was Renhold, but the door swung open to admit Rava. She had a small stack of books in her arms, and a leather case on a strap slung over her shoulder.
“I brought you some books, and a journal for you to record events and your thoughts,” Rava put the books down on the table and put the case on top of them, “and pens and ink – so you need not sit idle – I know how that rankles.”
“I’m surprised it’s permitted.”
“Mathis has communicated with Renhold, and he insisted.”
Wythe glanced through the books – Elian and Arn Maarinen’s old works on the Telmi, and a collection of modern Vaaselian poetry. She was feeling that even her present thoughts were a bit muddled, but when her hand touched the journal an idea came to her clearly.
“Rava, tell Mathis he must get my papers from the service archives in Barran. My work in telekinesis is documented there. Even though the Alliance is charging me in that connection I doubt they have any mages who truly understand it. Mathis needs to inform himself. And Faj should read them too – though I discussed it all with him long ago, he may need to refresh his memory.”
Rava smiled. “He did it already, before he left for the Spring Islands. You are in very good hands, Wythe.”
“Rava, I feel so helpless –”
Rava embraced her tightly. “I know you can hardly stand it – but with Mathis working so hard –”
Wythe nodded, sniffing a little. “I’m sure he’s doing all sorts of things I would never think of. But, Rava – I must speak to Renhold myself, before they send me to the tribunal.”
“Katya is working on him – I know he wants to see you.” Rava took Wythe’s hands in hers, and gave her fingers a reassuring squeeze. “You and Mathis will manage the Alliance mages – and then there will be a way to deal with Renhold.” She knew that Wythe would be unable to penetrate her consciousness, so she spoke more confidently than she felt she could really justify, and counted on her expression to convince her friend. “And now I must go – these matters have created a little extra work for the embassy, as you can imagine.”
It was after luncheon when the guard knocked again, and this time Wythe suppressed her hopes as much as she could, so it was a very real smile of relief and nearly pleasure that swept across her features when Renhold entered the room. He came to her at once, and interrupted her curtsey to take her hands and press them to his forehead.
“Wythe.”
“Renhold.” Then there was a silence, surprisingly lacking in awkwardness, though Renhold looked very sober, and Wythe’s smile faded. She led him to the settee.
“I would offer you tea – but I seem to have no authority,” she began as lightly as she could.
“None of this is according to my wishes, Wythe,” Renhold said, avoiding her eyes. “I am obliged to turn you over to Alliance authority. I don’t know what they’ll do with you, but whatever it is, it will be unlikely to help me.”
“I came south in order to help you.”
Renhold laughed bitterly. “You came south to try to talk me into supporting you.”
“I only want you to have the knowledge you need to keep from being misled – from doing something you will regret.”
“I think I will regret whatever course I take now. All Valmur’s old supporters are calling for me to crush the Telmi rebellion –” Renhold ignored Wythe’s snort of derision “– and many of the guilds are on their side, this time. Your only friends, Wythe, are Farin, Arn Maarinen and his parents, and some weaker scholarly houses.”
Wythe noticed that he omitted himself from this brief list of allies. “And your father and Elian?”
Renhold sighed, and kept his eyes averted. “Even Elian thinks you’ve gone too far this time.” He pulled himself up a little, to show his resolve. “Our kingdom includes the northern lands, all the way to the Uttermost Sea, you know that –”
“There are agreements,” Wythe interrupted.
“Yes, agreements that permit your people to live on the marshes and plains, without southern interference. But the agreements make no mention of who has rights to the land’s resources – you permit Toler trapping, for example, and logging –”
“Those agreements are with the Toler, and go many generations back beyond your dynasty. The present agreement with the crown is no interference.” It had not taken long for the conversation to deteriorate, Wythe noticed. Renhold must be under tremendous pressure. Well, so was she, and if he pressed her, she would press back.
“The Toler agreements establish precedent,” Renhold was saying.
“Renhold, I will not discuss the law with you – I am no legal scholar.”
“But the rule of law must apply – without it there will be warfare.”
Wythe stood and went to the table and put her hands on the undisturbed stack of books to lean toward the window. The courtyards of the school were empty.
“Do you know how long my people have inhabited their lands?” she began. “Certainly longer than your nobles have held theirs – and much, much longer than the crown of Vaaseli has presumed to hold authority over its territory.”
“Do you claim these lands as your property then?”
Wythe turned. Renhold sat with his back to her. “They are our home.”
Now he turned, and attempted to look her in the eye. “Oh yes, I know you don’t believe the land can have an owner, other than the Creator – but do you claim your elders have sovereign rights, for example?”
Wythe only held his gaze in reply. He was trying to lead her into a statement that could be defined in terms of law, and she would not do it, not without the advice of counsel.
Renhold sighed and looked away again. “If we cannot come to a peaceful resolution, there will be war – if I refuse to mount an armed assault on your barrier –”
“It would be useless.”
“There are many lords who command great forces who will not believe it without trying – and they’ll do it on their own if I refuse.”
“Then you must stop them. You had better prepare for that, your Highness – or leave them to the Telmi.” And to Farin, she thought to herself. He at least will honor the ancient agreements, and defend the northern lands against assault by rogue nobility.
“You think you’d enjoy a victory?” Renhold's voice was flat, betraying nothing of his own opinion of the Telmi's chances.
Again Wythe held Renhold in her silent regard. There really was no such thing in war as victory, and they both knew it.
After a tense silence, Renhold stood and joined Wythe at the window. Even through the fog of the barrier Wythe could feel his mind struggling with the conflicting demands of friendship, duty, and authority.
“Wythe, why are you doing this to me?” he cried at last in exasperation. “You are the one who put me on the throne, really – and now you’ll see me toppled.”
“You rose to your position yourself, Renhold, through following your own best inclinations. And that is how you’ll keep it.” Wythe felt real pity for the prince, and hoped he knew he hadn’t lost her friendship, but after a moment he clenched his fists, and turned on her and said, coldly, “There will be war, then – and the blood will be on your hands, Maga.” Then he brushed past her quickly, but not so quickly that she could fail to see the tears in his eyes that belied his grim expression. She didn’t turn to see him leave or the guard pull the door shut behind him.
Did he mean that he’d support the war-mongering nobles, or arm his own forces to oppose them? Either way, he blamed her – and so did the Alliance. She could only hope that Mathis understood all the particulars and could find a way to convince the tribunal mages, and that the Alliance could find a way to intervene before it did come to bloodshed. They could blame her and punish her if they liked, but they must do something to protect her people – and Renhold’s.

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